Another Crochet Project

Well, I am currenty working on another elepahnt but tonight I made two cute drawstring coin purses, one from a pattern and one designed by myself.
Heres the one made by a pattern:


Here's the pattern I used for the above: http://www.allcrafts.net/f.php?url=www.crochetnmore.com/drawstringcoinpurse.htm
EDITS ^^: I did up to round 19 and skipped 20-24

Here's mine I created:


And here's the pattern I created (i thought mine looks better.. maybe i am biased?):

::POUCH BODY::
To Start: Ch2
Rd1: 6sc in 2nd ch from hk, mm (move marker)(6sc)
Rd2: 2sc in each sc, mm (12sc)
Rd3: *2sc in next sc, sc in next sc* rep all the way ard, mm (18sc)
Rd4: *2sc in next sc, sc in next 2sc* rep all the way ard, mm (24sc)
Rd5: *2sc in next sc, sc in next 3sc* rep all the way ard, mm (30sc)
Rd6-16: sc in each sc ard (pouch should now be aprox. the height of index finger)
Rd17: ch4, sk next sc, dc in next sc, *ch1, sk next sc, dc in next sc* rep all the way ard, connect with slp stch to complete round
Rd18: sc in each crochet ard
FASTEN OFF

::DRAWSTRING::
1)ch a long chain,
2) *thread through Rd17 of the pouch (in/out, like sewing)* << do this twice
3) Connect both ends of chain with slp stch
4) FASTEN OFF..

^^ Anyways enjoy, and I will upload pictures of both pouches soon!